Class blog for Canisius College English 101 section H Spring 2011. Taught by professor Jeffry J. Iovannone. Course theme: Outcasts in contemporary American literature.
Saturday, May 7, 2011
Molly Rutter Extra Credit
Friday, May 6, 2011
Jaime Wallace- Extra Credit
Jaime Wallace- Extra credit
Bender Extra Credit
The short story I chose to write about was Jinx. Within the story there are two best friends. These best friends started out walking together going to stores. Once they went to the record store with the cute guy that was there they had more jinxing moments, their laughing, and flirting techniques almost as if their jinx's were them just mimicking each other. By the end, the one girl went off and made out with the cute boy from the store, and the other friend was left out walking by herself. Although not together, they both thought of the cute bubble skirt at the same time. Completing their cycle of jinxes. After the one girl who ditched her friend to go make out with a dude, and the other walked away by herself their relationship steadily declined till it came a point to graduate where they pretend to be keep in touch.
To me, the tale showed change in life, the change of the past within the seconds. The stability of things can easily just leave. Almost like the double meaning of Jinx. You can jinx yourself or someone else, by purposely making mentioning it, as if you were taking away the luck of the situation. Or you could jinx your best friend as if to say you owe me a soda since you said the same thing at the same time.
Bender writes with magical realism, and in this story it was a institutional story. Not like there was floating bears throughout the story, but a basic high school drama friendship. Its pathetic that that's the simplest thing and then adding the term Jinx in the story can make the meaning of it dramatically change from pathetic high school petty drama to a double sided tale.
Her story was more than just a jinx of two freinds, it was a jinx of a friendship, a friendship that started strong, based on petty conversations ( i.e. about boobs and butts) to an ending friendship of not being able to remember the others phone number.
Thursday, May 5, 2011
Maggie DeMarco extra credit
Leah Villari Extra Credit
Bobby Stroud Extra Credit
Although this was one of the more confusing stories I've ever read by Bender, I think she wrote it to show how it doesn't take much for people to grow apart. These girls seemed to be really good friends but this one occurrence caused them to never talk again. I think this is something a lot of people can relate to as I'm sure we all lose close friends suddenly. The story seemed pointless after reading it once, but afterwards I started to understand why it was written.
Wednesday, May 4, 2011
Sean Gregoire
The movie was a good way to review the book and catch things that I may have missed while reading. I find it much easier to stay focused and pay attention rather than reader where I tend to catch myself day dreaming or zoning out. Over all I enjoyed Marjane's story a lot.
Adam Swift Extra Credit
I chose to read the short story Job’s Jobs by Aimee Bender. The writer in the story is ordered by God that he could never write another word again he will be shot. So he listened to him and decided that the next best thing was to be a painter. But again God threatened his life. He went on to acting and again God would not let him. He tried to be an actor and a cook and God threatened to kill him. The man became very depressed. God showed up this time and told him that he was not allowed to do anything. God ordered him to shut his eyes and not to say a word. The man was tied up and confined to a box. The only thing he could do was let him imagination go where it wanted to.
No matter what or how many times someone takes something away from you, you are always going to find something that you are good at. There will always be options for you because at the end of the story the man still had the ability to dream even though had God taken away everything else, his thoughts were the one thing that couldn't be taken away. Sometimes we need to sacrifice the thing we love doing and I think that this is the main idea that Bender is trying to convey.
Sunday, May 1, 2011
Zack Schwartz Extra Credit
This story by Aime Bender was very interesting to me. A writer who loves his profession is visited by God and demanded to never write again or else he would be killed. He does this and takes up art and falls in love with that, God once again visits him and threatens him to give up the job. This cycle repeats itself many times, and each time the man finds a new passion and has it taken away from him. At the closing of the story, the man is not able to converse with anyone, and is secluded in a small room with only his thoughts to accompany him. At this point, the man cannot find anything else to make him happy because everything he could possibly enjoy had been taken away from him.
I believe there is a very important lesson in this story. Although it seems as though God is punishing this man, in reality he is helping him (until the very end of the story). Had God not prohibited this man to do these things, he would have never discovered any of his other passions. Had he not prohibited him to be a writer, he would have never picked up acting and fell in love with it. The lesson in this story is to expand your horizons and to try new things, because you may discover things about yourself that you never knew. By going out of your comfort zone, you learn about yourself as a person.
Zack Schwartz Post 12
I feel as thought I could have gotten even more from the story if it was narrated in English instead of in French. It is a completely different experience, in my opinion, when you are listening to words than when you are reading them. My brain functions much better when I hear things then when I read them. Had the movie been an English version of the film, I would have undoubtedly understood more and had been able to relate more to the story and the characters in it. Nevertheless, this was a great story that exposes the reader to a different world, and teaches a lesson no matter what form of it he or she encounters.
Saturday, April 30, 2011
Laura Giunta
Bobby Stroud
Although it was in a different language, the movie was not difficult to understand or watch. It was also quite interesting. The fact that someone was able to take the pictures and make them into a movie almost completely the same as the book was a treat. It also helped me understand things that were initially unclear.
adam swift
I really enjoyed watching the Persepolis movie in class this week. I understand the story a little better now. When I heard we were watching a movie version of the graphic novel I thought that the movie was going to be filmed with actual people but it was animated copying the book. I like that it was so much like flipping the pages through the book, but I think we could have related to it even more and had a better understanding of it if real people we in it. This was probably my favorite book of the year and I think the movie was a great way to end the year.
Post #11
Chelsa Wlodarczyk, Post #11
Jaime Wallace
Molly Rutter, Post #12
Hannah Lutley
Even though the movie was in a difference language it was still greatly impacted by it. I got to hear the change in voice and expressions and it helped to see what was really going on. I enjoyed it because I enjoy books on tape because i like being read too and hearing the change in tone and voices. Being able to pick up on the bits of humor the Marjane puts into the stories make the whole thing very enjoyable.
Alex Beilman - Blog Post for 4/25/11-4/29/11
Overall, I liked the way Satrapi told her story in both mediums. She injected some comedy in what one would assume is a miserable life story. However, she was able to tell in a colorful manner so it was not all gloom and doom.
Also, I think the movie and the book allowed some of us to gain a better understanding of what exactly is going on in Iran. At one point Satrapi mentions how people simply view all Iranians as bloodthirsty savages. Certainly I never held that thought, but it is a common stereotype. I think the book and movie prove otherwise, as both works portray a modernized city. However, ever since the 70's/80's there has always been a great political unrest and Satrapi is able to show the audience how that happened and why that happened.
Alex Beilman 4/25/11-4/29/11
Pererpolis The Movie
Also, I think when she had the French speaking throughout it it changed the way I heard the story. When in Iran I kept thinking they would be speaking Farsi or Arabic, didn't expect her to be speaking French. It changes the mood with her tone and the launage she explained the story in.
I thought it was funny and could related to some random parts of her tale because I know how she felt, but watching it animated you can picture yourself in (for instance when she was like I bet you I'll take my scarf off ).
Nadia Abdallah
Friday, April 29, 2011
Overall, the movie was not exactly what I expected but I did like it. I think that it left out a lot of the book which is unexpected considering each part of the book seemed to add an element to the overall feeling. I did enjoy both reading and watching the movie and think that you should continue reading this and watching!
Cassidy Weeks Post 11
Thursday, April 28, 2011
Maggie DeMarco post 12
Tuesday, April 26, 2011
Laura Giunta Extra Credit
Monday, April 18, 2011
Alex Beilman - Blog for 4/11/11-4/15/11
The other thing I found interesting is that there are still parts in the book that everyone can relate to. We discussed this concept in class. I found that I could relate to her going through a breakup. When we started the book it seemed like Marjane's problems were somewhat unique. I've never had to worry about my house being bombed, or my parents being arrested, or anything like that. However, as the book went on, I found she also experienced "normal" problems that plenty of other people have experienced. It made Satrapi's story seem a little more common and allowed more people in the class to relate to her.
Sunday, April 17, 2011
Sean Gregoire
Saturday, April 16, 2011
Bobby Stroud
One of the major topics discussed in class is whether or not Marji's mother should have sent her to Europe. I agree that this was a good idea because I believe that something bad would have happened to Marji if she stayed. Not only was merely being in the area and prone to a bombing dangerous, but the fact that Marji was becoming extremely rebellious was a danger as well. I don't think she would have tolerated by the authority figures much longer. Her parents made the right choice by putting her in a better situation/protecting her.
Post #11
Adam Swift Post # 11
In class we talked about whether or not it was the right decision for Marjane’s parents to send her away to Europe. I think that they did do the right decision because it is very dangerous in Iran. Marjane was also a very rebellious and did not conform to the rules. She even took out some anger on her principal. I think that if she had stayed she would have gotten herself or even her family in trouble. Europe was a chance to live a better life and have more opportunities. If I were In this situation I would have wanted to go to Europe because in there you can act your age and have fun. In Iran you are forced to grow up much more quickly.
She ends up facing some difficulties in Europe. She cannot speak the same language and her nationality is holding her back at time and she had to with the stereotypical though of those opposing Iranian way of life. She tries very hard to fit in with the others. One thing she does is cut her hair and where make up. I think that Marjane is being hard on herself because she feels guilty that her family is suffering back home. Last class we summed up Persepolis by going back thought the book looking for a frame that we could relate to our lives. I found I rather difficult to find one that I could relate to. I found one scene where Marjane is studying really hard for an exam and she turns to God for a moment asking for his help. I think that we all can relate to his situation. There are many times when we encounter a difficult situation and just don’t know what to do and rely on God. Over the winter break we traveled Florida for Training. I had never swam as hard and as much in my entire life and there we times where I wanted to quit and I thought “god just get me through this week, please” in the end we always get through it. I enjoyed reading Persepolis and am looking forward to watching the movie sometime in the future.
Leah Villari
I also liked this book because it seemed very real life. The situations she was in with drugs and bad friends are things that some teens go through at certain points in their life and I think Marjane did a good job with showing the paths you can choose to go down. Also I felt like it let teens and adults alike, know that it's okay to break down and go through some tragic times because you can only get stronger from it, and I felt like this was a main point of the story.
Molly Rutter, Post #11
Jaime Wallace, Post #11
Zack Schwartz Post 11
The story itself was one of the most compelling that I had ever read. Before reading, I had a very different view of Iran as a country. I looked at it as a merely a country comprised of people all with the same attitude. I believed everyone hated America, agreed on a backwards system of government and individuals did not have similar problems that exist in America. I now realize that Iran is a country of individuals, much like any other country in the world. Everyone has different views, and both good people and bad people exist. Marjane experienced a very trying life, and had the problems most Americans had as well as much more. This book has helped me not to judge someone until I am fully aware of their situation.
Laura Giunta Post 11
I am very happy that this was one of the novels we read in class this semester. We saved the best story for last. Unlike the other stories we read i found this one the most interesting and easy to follow. It could have been because it was in the style of a comic book, and the picutres made it more enjoyable but also enjoyed how she added humor to it as well. The pictures helped depict the story very well.
Friday, April 15, 2011
maggie demarco post 11
Sunday, April 10, 2011
Allison Shubert Post # 10
The other story we read called "The Facts in the Case of the Departure of Miss Finch" by Neil Gaiman in the main character seemed allienated and outcasted by society. This is because of her intelligence and her attitude towards society which comes off as misunderstood. She can't seem to get along with society and seems to be distant towards everyone due to her lack of communicating.
Kaitlyn Dickey, Post 10
It's surprised me how much I've enjoyed reading this novel. Because she is Muslim I didn't think that I could ever relate to her as much as I've realized I can. Although my lifestyle differs from hers, the things we go through and the emotions we feel seem to be extremely similar. This novel has made me have a new respect for the Islamic culture.
Saturday, April 9, 2011
Leah Villari Post 10
Miss Finch is an outcast because of her over the top "matter of fact" attitude. The other characters can't relate her and possibly are not as knowledgable as Miss Finch. Miss Finch seems to be filled with facts that can't relate to what young adults normally have discussions about. This is relatable to Marjane because she is also very smart and takes an interest in what's going on around her. She seems to understand what's going on more then her classmates do. Because of this, others may be intimidated by her intelligence. Marjane had her own set of views and knew what she believed in and wanted for her country. She knows what she wants and this fact can be seen as a turnoff to others around her. This may be why she is viewed as in outcast in society.
Bobby Stroud
The other story was "The Complete Persepolis" by Marjane Satrapi. In this the main character Marji, is a native of Iran and we view her life as she goes through different tribulations in this country. However for a child, she behaves very maturely and handles her situations in an adult manner. Despite this she still feels alone and misunderstood which in my eyes classifies her as somewhat of an outcast.
Ashlyn Zgoda Post 10
Brittany Coppinger Post 10(?)
Adam Swift Post # 10
I really enjoyed reading Persepolis this week. The comic makes for a very easy read. I have learned a few things regarding the Islamic revolution in Iran as well. The main character Marjane is brought up in a family that is somewhat less religious than most of the others in the community. It was made mandatory for the woman to cover their hair at this time. Marjane and her mother wore less conservative veils in order to show their opposition to the new regime. The frame on page 125 is a great example of what Marjane and her family think of the new dress code. They are looking out at their neighbors while the mother says look just last year those beefy thighs were out for everyone to see and now she is covered head to toe in a chador. This scene also exemplifies Marjane’s role as an outcast in Iranian society. Marjane also wears a different patterned veil at times to show her opposition. Marjane’s parents at one point explain to her how she needs to lie about how many times a day she prays. This is probably an attempt for her to blend into the general public. This story also reminds me of the movie called Not Without My Daughter. An American family visits Iran and ends up getting stuck in the country during the revolution. After reading this comic I plan on looking for some more graphic novels because they are enjoyable to read and at the same time the graphics help illustrate a clear meaning of the passage also they eliminate the burden of reading a lengthy novel.
Molly Rutter, Post #10
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Laura Giunta Post 10
Marjane is an outcast in this story, not because of how she looks, but because she wants to be. She could change her ways and conform with the rest of society but she does not want to. In class we had discussed how she wears a different colored veil in order to stand out from the rest of the people. Marjane is a person who wants to be heard and not put in the corner. I found it very sad that during this time when children's fathers were being put in jail because of their beliefs, Marjane was upset that her father was not. She wanted to have an exciting family story about being tortured or suffering. It is sad to think of such young children having to grow up in a time of war and thinking that way.
Post .... Persepolis!
Nadia Post something
Zack Schwartz Post 10
In the book, "Persepolis" by Marjane Satrapi, Marjane was the outcast. The reasons that she became a pariah, however, are not some than can easily be adjusted. Her and her family have specific political beliefs that go against that of the mainstream government. She behaves and acts differently than much of society, so she feels very alone. She cannot just succumb to the beliefs of others like Finch could have, because the right thing to do is to stand up for what you believe in. Marjane is doing the right thing, but an effect of doing the right thing is being looked upon as an outcast. She wears different clothes and does not pray every day unlike the rest of society, but at least she is doing what she believes is right.
Jaime Wallace Post #10
Hannah Lutley #10
In reading "The Complete Persepolis" by Marjane Satrapi we first learn that a graphic novel is a comic book in novel length. In this novel we see the young girl Marji as an outcast. In class we made many valid points to where we see her as an outcast, but in my view she is different but not necessarily an outcast. She is living in a world fill with issues and she is just a young girl trying to make her way through it. Yes she is different from many children in school because she knows so much about the war but I wouldn't say that, that makes her an outcast.
Friday, April 8, 2011
maggie demarco post 10
Sunday, April 3, 2011
Kaitlyn Dickey, Post 9
Another discussion we had in class is whether or not people with disabilities should be treated differently then everyone else. One argument is yes, they should not be treated as harshly because they are at a big disadvantage. Another argument is no, they should be treated the same because they want to feel as normal as possible. My personal opinion is that you need to meet somewhere in the middle. It depends a lot on the situation. On one hand you should treat that person the same as everyone else, they're just different in a different way than others are, but on the other hand you should still take into account that that person is at a disadvantage. If they need help it's okay to give it, just remember to let them have some independence.
Leah Villari
In the episode of Glee that we watched, Arty is in a wheelchair. Mr. Schuster suggests they raise money for a special bus that Arty can be wheeled into it. At first the kids are hesitant and ignorant of Arty. But when Mr. Schuster makes everyone get in a wheelchair and experience what Arty deals with everyday, they realize that he deserves more respect then what they were giving him. When Arty confronts the girl that tells him she had faked a studder to relate to him, he is clearly hurt and makes it clear that at the end of the day he's still in a wheelchair. As it is for Clare, it must be frustrating to see people take for grant what they have. For people who can walk but choose not to appreciate this seems to be wasteful in this case. This relates to the Glee episode because I think the lesson the group learned from being in wheelchairs made them realize how grateful they should be.
Saturday, April 2, 2011
Hannah Lutley #9
In my opinion Clare wanted us to see that even though people are different from others doesn't mean that they don't have the same or close to the same abilities. She shows us that all these people want is to be treated equally and to be given the same chances that others are given. The producers of Glee also have an outlook like Clare. They want the viewers to see that disabilities may not limit us to the standards that can be met. The way society views people who are "different" is wrong and both Clare and the producer of Glee want society to change their mind set.
Bobby Stroud
Laura Giunta Post 9
By comparing this story to the episode of Glee we watched in class, we notice how people with disabilities are treated from different perspectives. One being that they should be treated like any other student, or the other that they should have special treatment because of their disability. I believe they should be treated like anyone else. People with disabilities know what they can and cannot do, so treating them equally should not be a problem.
Molly Rutter, Post #9
Ashlyn Zgoda Post 9
Brittany Coppinger
Zack Schwartz Post 9
I support the female gym teacher's decision to add the girl with Downs Syndrome to the cheer leading roster. I also support her decision to treat her like the other girls on the team, and demand a lot from her. This is most likely all the girl ever wanted; to be a member of a team and to be a part of something alongside her peers. I also trust the gym teacher made the right decision because she has an older sister with the same disease. She is undoubtedly well versed in dealing with people with Downs and she knows what they truly want and desire. She is in a good position to do the best thing possible for this young girl.
Nadia i dont remember the number
Nadia A
Zack Schwartz Post 8
In Octavia Butler's story, Speech Sounds, she describes a world in which human beings suffer from an epidemic that takes away their ability to speak. This piece made me realize how vital speaking and communicating in general in every day life. Human beings are a very social species, and communicating with other human beings is something that comes natural to us. Every day, we are in hundreds of situations where we communicate with others for various reasons; it is merely how we live our lives. Had this epidemic struck a different species such as an owl, not much change in lifestyle would occur. On the contrary, if it stuck ants, the species would undoubtedly become extinct. This story explores which path the human race would follow.
Maggie DeMarco Post 9
Post #9
Jaime Wallace Post #9
Friday, April 1, 2011
Allison Shubert Post # 9
In the beginning of the episode the group of kids in glee club get to go and preform at an event, yet Artie faces an obstacle when Will, the director of the glee club announces that the bus they will be taking is not wheel chair accessible. Will brought up the idea of a bake sale to support Artie and raise enough money for him to be able to travel with the club. The rest of his club mates seemed to not be so thrilled about this idea and thought of the bake sale as being a hassle. This enraged Will, therefore he made it mandatory for all the kids in the club to be in a wheelchair during school throughout the rest of the week. This really showed the children what it was like to be in Artie's shoes and truly taught them a valuable lesson about what they take for granted every day. Even though Artie was physically different, he just wanted to be treated as if he could walk. After his club mates were put in wheel chairs, I think they appreciated Artie a significant amount more and truly saw how talented he was.
Tuesday, March 22, 2011
Brittany Coppinger - Extra Credit
Sunday, March 20, 2011
Allison Shubert Post # 7
In the story "Motherfucker" the title basically is the gist of the story, it's about a man that likes to have sex with mothers. To him having sex isn't really an emotional thing and he just does it for self pleasure. He preys on the single mothers because he believes they are easier to get with and take advantage of. Ultimately he does develop feelings for a one woman named Starlet, but ends up losing her due to his lack of having real emotions for someone. Although he seems incapable of falling for someone, it did seem like he genuinely liked her but in the end he just couldn't sustain the relationship.
Allison Shubert Post # 8
The one story we read The Evening, the Morning, and the Night was my favorite. She used illness and conflict in life to share the story about the main characters struggle. The main character Lynn was plagued with an unfortunate disease called DGD, which ultimately ended the life of her two parents. This disease makes people violent and spin out of control. This disease seemed to outcast her in society, and she seemed to be very alone. She found happiness though when she found others with the same disease as her and they all lived under one roof. I think this story by Butler was very metaphorical because she used illness as the major theme of the story and what an individual has to go through while trying to blend in with society.
Hannah Lutley
In both of these stories we see Butler comparing these to real life events and problems that we have in our world. Butler seems to be trying to show us that diseases can be overcome with faith and hope. If we continue to run away from problems and people with "issues" then the problems in the world will never be fixed and overcome. Like in Speech Sounds , if we learn to talk about our problems then things could be resolved faster then if we don't talk.
Saturday, March 19, 2011
Adam Swift Post # 8
I found both of Octavia Butler’s science fiction novels very unique this week. Speech Sounds was about a world where a pandemic limited the ability for people to communicate. The majority can neither read or write nor speak. By reading this short story we learn how difficult life would be without communication. The woman Rye in the story can speak but she barely does it because she is one of the few who can. The main means of communication is body language. Just simple gestures are universal and have become a vital way for people to communicate with one another.
We also discussed whether you would rather be able to read and write and not talk, or be able to talk and not read or write. I would rather have the ability to verbally communicate with others and understand spoken language. Everything we do is based around talking. I couldn’t imagine not being able to understand music. Also not being able to understand language is kind of like when you’re listening to a conversation in a different language which can be really frustrating. I would feel so lonely and isolated not being able to talk to others.
Ashlyn Zgoda Post 8
Bobby Stroud
Similarly, the other story, "Speech Sounds" is also about an unheard of disease that is affecting a society. The diseases deprive people of the ability to read or write. For this reason, characters cannot communicate because not all of them have the same capabilities. However the disease eventually fades. The significance of each story is that Butler seems to be trying to show that diseases can be overcome with faith and hope.
3/19/11 Andrew Mernan
They are both searching for a acceptance in their stories, and they want to try to fit in with the rest of society. However, because of their physical differences, they are not accepted by everyone as they wish to be. The boy in "Ironhead" has sisters who are very good at sports, which put even more pressure on him to try to fit in with everyone else, but he is unable to because of his Iron head. The boy in "The Leading Man" the main character searches for decades trying to find out which doors the keys on his hand open. Both of these characters are in search of something very important because of the physical differences they were born with.
Post #8
In Speech Sounds, due to radiation poisoning, people are not able to communicate as well. The illness targeted things such as speech, the ability to read or write, and the ability to comprehend other's speech. This reduced people to a more primitive level, communicating through gestures and incomprehensible sounds. Due to this lack of communication, people became less trusting of others, and often people would be harmed due to jealousy of the abilities they might still have possessed. The main character, Rye, is doubtful of people's ability to move past this lack of understanding and she considers killing herself, but after she meets two children who can speak and understand, she is given a purpose to live for.
Chelsa Wlodarczyk Post #8
Leah Villari Post 8
When Lynn meets Beatrice she immediately doesn't like her. Beatrice explains to her that eventually everyone drifts and tells her that she wants Lynn to take her place one day. Lynn clearly knows what happens to someone when they drift because of what happened to her parents so she is hesistant about the topic in general. When Lynn talks about Beatrice's offer she isn't very keen of the idea of spending her life in a ward. Beatrice explains that they help people and keep them from harming themselves further. I feel that in this whole exchange between characters, Butler is trying to get the point across that Lynn should take the job to help herself and others with DGD. Although this means personal sacrifice on Lynn's behalf, she realizes by the end that this is what she needs to do.